camouflage
By yi-ching lin
Tags: autumn, duck, ducklings, ducks, fall, foliage, leaves, new york, new york state, november, postaday2011, rockefeller preserve, Rockefeller State Park Preserve, Sleepy Hollow, swan lake, tree, upstate, upstate new york, Westchester
Category: art, city, nature, nyc, photography, poetry, structure, writing
when it is
clementine season,
all i can think of is
the closeness of
you, floating
between the
avenues, juxtaposed
by a bright,
punctuated glance
of sweet citrus in the
air. it takes very
little to change
the current
.
20111202:0823
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Your poetry is understated, leaving the river to fill in the silence left after the last line. This is good technique and good craft.
i really appreciate your thoughtful words. thank you so much for taking the time. i’m sorry to read about your and Ethel’s loss – my deepest condolences. i started adding a bit of writing to each post on a daily basis here after a loss, starting on February 18, 2010. time really flies, but some things stay the same.
Nice post 🙂