7 Responses to “redrawn”

  1. you have redrawn
    the map to your
    heart. overnight,
    two roads were under
    new construction,
    a third walled
    off, a cul-de-sac
    has become a
    sinkhole, and the
    driveway is now
    an occasion for
    long departures

  2. Perfectpairing of photo to poem. I like that line about long departures at the end. Who hasn’t stood and lingered not wanting to say good-bye? Love the warmth and the shapes in this photo.

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