you have redrawn
the map to your
heart. overnight,
two roads were under
new construction,
a third walled
off, a cul-de-sac
has become a
sinkhole, and the
driveway is now
an occasion for
long departures
.
20101007:2156
y
Perfectpairing of photo to poem. I like that line about long departures at the end. Who hasn’t stood and lingered not wanting to say good-bye? Love the warmth and the shapes in this photo.
you have redrawn
the map to your
heart. overnight,
two roads were under
new construction,
a third walled
off, a cul-de-sac
has become a
sinkhole, and the
driveway is now
an occasion for
long departures
.
20101007:2156
y
Perfectpairing of photo to poem. I like that line about long departures at the end. Who hasn’t stood and lingered not wanting to say good-bye? Love the warmth and the shapes in this photo.
it’s an occasion for arrivals and departures! (smile)
Ditto what Leslie wrote.
thank you, both!
This is a beauty.
thank you – it belongs in a chapel.