heavy

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  1. adjust yourself
    to the moment
    heaviest to
    the parts of you that have nothing
    to do with mass. adjust
    the sudden
    buoyancy, the
    wetness, the blur. stand a moment
    longer, even
    longer,
    underneath
    the nozzle of
    nausea, let it wash
    over – rinse, adjust,
    repeat, as necessary
    .
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    y

  2. I can’t stop laughing to comment!!!!!!!!

    • (smile) i wrote the poem with something else in mind, but then i saw that i had this photo, which fits if you were to take the poem to another entirely different place (smile).

  3. I took one look at that greasy ball which probably tastes really good and immediately envisioned my midriff swelling. Next I read your poem and lost it…. I will not forget this pairing, EVERRRRRRR!

    • (smile) this is dubbed the “Newark Style” hot dogs – pizza bread over two deep-fried hot dogs, french fries, deep-fried sweet potatoes and onions. i’ve never had anything like it! i thought Kokot would be the first to respond (smile).

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