there are days
when the air
has been bruised
so badly, we cannot
recognize whether or not
we are awake.
on these
days, our
bodies, such naturally
careless limbs, become
overwhelmingly
aware.
and suddenly,
shoulders and knees,
ankles and wrists,
even knuckles, round off
into perfect erasers,
treading slowly
across the surface
of day, removing
a word or two,
a sentence, and loss
that never adds up
.
20100322:2228
y
Hi Yi-Ching. I like the way everything works together in this photograph–and poem: the words on the ‘pink pearl’, the shine on the wood, cloth, knob.
wow–simple yet elegant photo statement
and a pearl that is pink–now that’s an interesting allusion to the world of oysters and pearls underwater–and how pearls form.
there are days
when the air
has been bruised
so badly, we cannot
recognize whether or not
we are awake.
on these
days, our
bodies, such naturally
careless limbs, become
overwhelmingly
aware.
and suddenly,
shoulders and knees,
ankles and wrists,
even knuckles, round off
into perfect erasers,
treading slowly
across the surface
of day, removing
a word or two,
a sentence, and loss
that never adds up
.
20100322:2228
y
Great capture, Y. And great poem to boot. Well done.
good evening! and thank you.
simple composition. light line at side object makes dimension is more uppermost. great photograph
this is very interesting.
the setup for the shot.
Hi Yi-Ching. I like the way everything works together in this photograph–and poem: the words on the ‘pink pearl’, the shine on the wood, cloth, knob.
wow–simple yet elegant photo statement
and a pearl that is pink–now that’s an interesting allusion to the world of oysters and pearls underwater–and how pearls form.
nice connections! thank you!
i bought that the day before i left for HK with great urgency – for some reason – and it is still sitting there…. such a nice pic – great
(laugh) that’s cute! thank you, Charles!