to-dos

5 Responses to “to-dos”

  1. the day’s errands
    compress and
    expand on a
    repeated motif,
    with very little
    improvisation
    like an accordion,
    breaking into
    an afternoon
    .
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  2. the blue draws me right into this scene, and the mirroring in the photograph and in the poem really well done.

  3. a longer story to be told. bravo!

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