with you, apologies
come after a long
numbness, stripped
down to every
joint, then
a requisite
freeze
before arriving
at the doorsteps
like Spring unhinged
.
20110517:0832
y
Y,
Beautiful photo. I also really like the poem. I haven’t figured out why but the “stripped down to every joint” line really jumps out at me. Very nice!
yi-ching lin photography 
with you, apologies
come after a long
numbness, stripped
down to every
joint, then
a requisite
freeze
before arriving
at the doorsteps
like Spring unhinged
.
20110517:0832
y
…sounds like you just might be writing about a man (I recognise my own darker moments in here 😐 ). Nice photo – hydrangea?
hydrangea was yesterday’s photo. these are lilacs.
Beautiful! I adore lilac. 🙂
thank you! me, too (smile).
Y,
Beautiful photo. I also really like the poem. I haven’t figured out why but the “stripped down to every joint” line really jumps out at me. Very nice!
Peace,
Stephen
i like that idea, too! thank you for enjoying it (smile).