the city leaks
into each rendition
of tonight’s Chopin –
harsh horns cut
into a couple of
rests, tires trail
and brake
too closely again,
loose sirens lick
the eighth
notes down
to their stems –
i observe
every repeat,
in search of
an empty street
.
20100504:2336
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Lovely. I think you responded to my comment and I never replied. Sorry but would love to meet up and share some words. Do you ever go the AAWW open mic?
the city leaks
into each rendition
of tonight’s Chopin –
harsh horns cut
into a couple of
rests, tires trail
and brake
too closely again,
loose sirens lick
the eighth
notes down
to their stems –
i observe
every repeat,
in search of
an empty street
.
20100504:2336
y
[…] brake too closely again, loose sirens lick the eighth notes down to their stems – i observe every repeat, in search of an empty street . 20100504:2336 y Posted in art, life, personal, poetry, […]
Lovely. I think you responded to my comment and I never replied. Sorry but would love to meet up and share some words. Do you ever go the AAWW open mic?
what’s AAWW?
Great photograph! Well done!
thank you!
i’m guessing AAWW is this:
http://www.aaww.org/aaww_events.html
ahhh…(smile) thank you!
Yes, Asian American Writer’s Workshop. I think their Open Mic is every third Thursdays.